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One Day She'll See

March 22, 2011
By Rory7 SILVER, Kanata, Other
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She's dying inside
cant you see? S
She's cold to the bone
and one day...
she'll wake up...
and know she's alone.L
Like dust in wind
she'll be gone.
For she fears if she lets go
it will be the last time.

© Sandy H., Woodbridge, CT

The author's comments:
When people are suicidal they tend to not tell anyone, and it's like they're living in a dream world, where no matter what everyone hates them. And I think how suicide happens is that one day they just snap.
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skisoul96 GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 8:42 pm
skisoul96 GOLD, Flushing, New York
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lol i thought they mite have had some rlly meaningful reason that i was stupidly missing(not a first) but ok thats kewl...awesum poem!
Rory7 SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 4:22 pm
Rory7 SILVER, Kanata, Other
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they aren't anything, i don't know why they are there i think i must have screwed up with the typing or something
skisoul96 GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 10:28 am
skisoul96 GOLD, Flushing, New York
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Don't worry about the world coming to an end today
its already tomorrow in Australia.

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rlly good poem, its nice n short n to the point but at same time has the chilling affect its supposed to have, just wonderin wat r the S&L for at the ned of two lines?