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A Broken Being

March 28, 2011
By SecrecyGirl17 GOLD, La Monte, Missouri
SecrecyGirl17 GOLD, La Monte, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a storm, so bring your umbrella."


I look all around me
All I see is darkness.
Different shades of black
Slowly enclosing around me.
I look in the mirror
All I see is a hollow body.
Empty and Lonely.
No smiles,
No happiness,
No love,
No friendships...
A sad fragile mistake.
Full of lifeless breaths.
The significance of a misprint..
A broken being.


The author's comments:
I wrote this after deciding it was time to turn a new leaf... let out my true feelings and say goodbye to the past.

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on Dec. 8 2011 at 4:34 pm
SecrecyGirl17 GOLD, La Monte, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is a storm, so bring your umbrella."

wow thank you so much! your comment ment a lot =)

on Nov. 30 2011 at 10:52 pm
ebj.2014 PLATINUM, St. John, Washington
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Great poem! I can totally relate. Everyone goes through this at one point in their lives! Good job on putting how you truly felt into detailed, descriptive words.