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An Admirer

March 30, 2011
By normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Do we eat to live or live to eat?

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A smile on your radiant face
is all I need
to make up my day.
The gray clouds that once cascaded overhead
now gone,
that you sent me that glimmering hope.

But you never seem to notice
that I’m here watching over you.
And I wonder,
Am I invisible,
Or is what I’m feeling too surreal?

I don’t know
And I don’t care.

What I do know is that,
you'll always have
my love and affection.

© Ashley B., Potomac, MD

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normgrl GOLD said...
on May. 6 2011 at 6:02 pm
normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
13 articles 11 photos 105 comments

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aww...thanks so much..and no worries, the one on FB should be posted here shortly. It's still pending for approval from the editors
Princess_Khushi said...
on May. 6 2011 at 5:59 pm
Aww... it wasnt as gud as the one u wrote on FB just days back but the words sure did touch my heart!
normgrl GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2011 at 5:49 pm
normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
13 articles 11 photos 105 comments

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Do we eat to live or live to eat?

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oh thanks bri. really, thanks. haha :D and great game!
normgrl GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2011 at 5:46 pm
normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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hanks joey and I know who YOU would dedicate this poem to ;)
justme23 said...
on Apr. 26 2011 at 2:12 pm
It was okl... Not top noch but it was good
dodo1 said...
on Apr. 26 2011 at 2:11 pm
omg:,)..............