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Play Me Not

April 23, 2011
By WriterGirl33 PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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It is better to not speak and let people think you are a fool, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt.

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Why did you choose
me?
Why am I your
victim?
Why did you have to steal my breath?
Why do you make me love
you?
Why do rake my heart piece by piece?
Why do you treat me like your tease?
Why don't you realize that I can feel the pain?
...
because you want fame from your
friends?
or do you just get scared of a four letter word called
LOVE?

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.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 6:26 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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I can relate to this unfortunately :/ The one thing I would suggest is that you would make this flow a little better...it seemed choppy. Other than that, I liked this a lot. Keep writing!
ChildOfThePast SILVER said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:52 pm
ChildOfThePast SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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I didn't like the "LOVE" lines. It was a letdown to an amazing poem.
sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 12:07 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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i understood wat ur tryin to say but it doesn't have a flow... And its a  nice way to express ur feeling's... check out my work:)