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I Will Not Cut

May 19, 2011
By kirashanel SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
kirashanel SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
if ur not punk ur nothin at all.


In the beyond.
Beneath these waves.
An endless grass within my gaze.
In this pond.
Beneath this color.
an endless splash not a grey or pallor.
Beneath this skin.
and endless raw emotion.
Somtimes anger of love as an ocean.
Beneath these tears.
nothin but fears.
anger hurt, or sadness.
madness madness madness
beneath this knife.
each slice brings calm.
like chapped lips brought to life by lip balm.
for now in this beyond.
instead of an ocean I perfer pond.
to lock up that emotion.
I will not cut.



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on Jun. 19 2011 at 9:21 pm
JessJess96 BRONZE, Town Creek, Alabama
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"Some people see the world in black and white, but never see the shades of gray. Those shades of gray are the ones that would give me hope, because they open my eyes to so much more." -Me

Very very pretty poem :)

on Jun. 19 2011 at 7:22 pm
WannaBeWriternumbertwo BRONZE, Brooklyn Park, Minnesota
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&quot;If you cannot read this, please ask the flight attendant for assistance.&quot;<br /> United Airlines Flight Safety Brochure<br /> _________________________________________________________________________________

I could feel the emotion as well. :)

on Jun. 19 2011 at 6:39 pm
Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
16 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
it&#039;ll be okay, if it&#039;s not okay it&#039;s not over.

i loved this

on Jun. 19 2011 at 6:11 pm
samisback SILVER, Rock Hill, Missouri
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What doesn&#039;t kill you only makes you stronger.<br /> I can sleep when I&#039;m dead.<br /> Are you an Air Force brat?

very good peice! i really liked the rhyming, repetition and all of the emotion that you put into it!