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Breathe

June 5, 2011
By Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
53 articles 16 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"sha'ahnleh: they danced with fate"-the kiesha'ra series by amelia atwater-rhodes


Breeze is fly-
ing.
'just-go-by'-ing.
I can't see--
But
I'm not try-
ing.

I see treetops
I see towers
U see blooming:
Crystals --
Flowers --

Fantasy
Leading me,
Some-where bet-
er than
Reali-
Ty.

Amniotic truly awake,
Not dreaming?
Too good to be true...
What evils
Are scheming?

The night is grinning
Our whispers spinning
I am loving
This
Beginning.

The author's comments:
I love him.

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on Jul. 2 2011 at 7:40 am
Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
53 articles 16 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"sha'ahnleh: they danced with fate"-the kiesha'ra series by amelia atwater-rhodes

It's not supposed to be amnotic or whatever I HATE Autocorrect. It's am I awake'