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Beautiful Dreamers

June 12, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Beautiful dreamers,
sleeping in the sunshine,
you look like faeries,
you look like lilies,
thriving in the sun,
your mind is coming undone,
let your ideas flow,
let your wonder grow.


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on Aug. 4 2011 at 12:46 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Thank you!

on Aug. 3 2011 at 11:54 pm
corallee DIAMOND, Newport Coast, California
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Great job. I like how the poem itself is a dream!

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:47 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Thanks! :D

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:41 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Very well written. Like fighting writer's block :)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:30 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! Yeah, I love lilies. :)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:07 am
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

No one thinks about Lillies anymore. Beautfil flowers, they are. 5/5 stars :)

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 9:32 am
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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You are very very welcome :P

on Jul. 3 2011 at 2:04 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you!

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 12:15 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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I love it! :D Wonderful piece :) 5/5*

My fav lines: let your ideas flow,

let your wonder grow.