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Beautiful Scars

June 22, 2011
By Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
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Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

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"The time is here, the end is near,the lonliness I always fear presents itself and like a giant wave it crashes into me without warning. Washing me into the dark and lonely existence I always knew was coming."

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She walks in beauty
showing her scars
from past love and pain.
She is like a fierce goddess
and a gentle flower
all in one.
I watch now
scared and unsure
of how to proceed
of how to make her
heart mine, now and forever
but alas,it be only a dream, love
Only a dream.
Though the swelling of my heart
gives permission
She trusts no one
for she been deceived
every time her heart skipped for
another
Her dazzling smile cast
a beautiful curse on me
a curse I call love.
Can it be love with no trust?
One can only hope.
One can only dream.
For she walks in beauty
and has stolen my heart.

© David U., Murray Hill, NJ

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She had stolen my heart. What more can I say?
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Niarra_Nightmare SILVER said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 4:38 pm
Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The time is here, the end is near,the lonliness I always fear presents itself and like a giant wave it crashes into me without warning. Washing me into the dark and lonely existence I always knew was coming."

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Of course! Aspiring writers and poets have to help each other out. Who's gonna understand you more than another writer or poet.
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 11:53 am
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

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Beautiful work. Five stars, you deserve it.

Can you please look at some of my work and tell me what you think?

Niarra_Nightmare SILVER said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 10:09 pm
Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The time is here, the end is near,the lonliness I always fear presents itself and like a giant wave it crashes into me without warning. Washing me into the dark and lonely existence I always knew was coming.&quot;

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Thank you! That's just what I needed to hear today! And you know what, you got it! I have a lot more where this piece came from. ^^ Thank you for commenting. Please tell your friends to read and give me comments. I love hearing what the world has to say about my art.
Lola_Black GOLD said...
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Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
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This is simply incredible! Keep writing!