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My Body and Mind

June 23, 2011
By Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"


Behind eyes that have only seen pain
Beyond a heart that was only meant to be broken
Between the thoughts of death and rebirth
Lies my body and mind

A mind that dances around the thought of suicide
Not knowing all that is already known

As my body lies lifeless on the floor
Not with me, yet not away from me
It turns gray with the sickness of my thoughts

Not living, not trusting
Being truly alone
Only to suffer from a pain so cold

Will this ever end?
Only time can tell
And even that thought itself is unbearable


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on Apr. 8 2012 at 11:20 am
FleshRipper GOLD, Guilford, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm not surprised, it's just kinda suprising." -me

I love it. This is seriously the way I feel. I like to write depressing poems, too.

on Feb. 23 2012 at 11:21 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"

ha well thank u :) and if u like depressing poems I'm ur writter lol

on Feb. 23 2012 at 10:42 pm
AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Music is a higher revelation from wisdom and philosophy. ~Ludwig Von Beethoven

Its beautiful, emotional, and somewhat depressing but its an amazing poem. I think the depressing ones are the best.

on Feb. 2 2012 at 11:12 am
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
18 articles 17 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

I think this poems really emotional and sad, but its wonderfully written, and I especially love the last two lines, I might quote that as a facebook status lol =)