Sometimes I think we just have too many young people in the service. I mean, I'm not saying it's the worst thing in the world. But I don't think people should be going into the service the secnd they turn eighteen. I think they should wait a few years, maybe go to college, then maybe think about joining the service.

I think you should show him this, as soon as you can. Because you never know, it could change his mind. He may think twice when he reads this about the fact that he'll be leaving you behind. Then again, you have to believe that if he does decide to go, that he will come back. I know he will. :) But if there's nothing you can do to make him change his mind, then the only thing you can do is show him this, tell him how you feel, and just always be there for him.

I really liked this piece. Very strong. Did you mean to have those few random characters at the end?