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Crooked Aim

June 26, 2011
By LyricalBeauty GOLD, Fontana, California
LyricalBeauty GOLD, Fontana, California
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Favorite Quote:
" 'I am happy' that's just the saddest lie..."

"I think that all the silence is worse than all the violence. Fear is such a weak emotion, that's why I despise it..."

I know I need you, out of my heart.
But in order to do that, I don't know where to start.
The memories seem to be stuck in my head-
locked on continuous replay.
And even though our relationship is now dead;
I can't shake these feelings away.
You abolished my heart,
You shattered it in two.
Cupid must've have missed with his dart,
Because he didn't to hit you too.

The author's comments:
Inspired by love loss.

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Mrs.Green said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:41 am
Mrs.Green, Rialto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love conquers the love of power, the world will be at peace."

The last 2 lines nearly made me cry ='/ I soooo knw the feeling

on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:13 am
Jonah Awesome, Fontana, California
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Again, nicely done

on Jul. 21 2011 at 9:48 am
Abby Dugbartey, Fontana, California
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Completley able to relate =/

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 9:51 am
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Aww. :'( . Tears. Don't ever stop writing!