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My Promise to Evan

July 6, 2011
By iHannahJ GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
iHannahJ GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I veiw myself on my intentions, the world veiws me on my actions."


I love you more than life.
I can’t say what I would do
if something stopped life for you.
If the cause was at your own hands
I would be frozen with guilt for what I couldn’t
make you believe.
I’m shouting this to you now,
so I don’t regret what I didn’t do.
You are the best thing in my world.
You make me laugh.
You open me up to “new” music.
You have such a bright string of lights.
I can’t lose you over
an eclipse of the sun.
we made a promise
swear on our lives.
That I won’t be burying you at
the next sunrise.


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on Feb. 14 2012 at 11:29 am
softballbabe2014 SILVER, Wimberley, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Smile now, Cry later." "everything happens for a reason"

I relate to this! tottally(:

on Feb. 13 2012 at 4:51 pm
TheWrittenMe BRONZE, Prosser, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
If you don't know me don't judge me.

This was really good. It was very well written. I felt love but for some reason I also felt loss. I loved it.

on Jul. 26 2011 at 3:41 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

i really like it, its sad but its written really well! great job! :)