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Soldier, Soldier

July 7, 2011
By Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
8 articles 3 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Whatever you are, be a good one.\\\"

Soldier, Soldier, where are you? I can't see through all the gun smoke. Solider, Solider why cant you, Just come straight home to your folks? This world needs no more fighting. This world needs no more pain. We all need a little enlightening. We all need to dance in the rain. Soldier, Soldier, please be careful. Take care of you and your crew. Soldier, Soldier, my big general, Please know that we love you.

The author's comments:
I wrote this for my friend Erika. Her brother just got deployed.

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Catch SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 4:19 pm
Catch SILVER, Willow Springs, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Never ever give up! Don't listen to what people say they will just try to shove you in the dirt. Listen to your heart.

I loved the poem it is so realistical.

Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 5:06 am
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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I love it and its true too sorry about your friends brother. :)

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 3:23 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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wow i really love this poem a lot , specially since i have enlisted in Indian Air Force ! good job , really heart warming !

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 1:50 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

Hey I think the format is messed up...