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No One Understands.

July 12, 2011
By AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”


It's strange how I'd rather read and write?




No one understands.

Rather them going out,

I rather stay in?


No one understands.

It feels as if sometimes I'm all alone;
By myself


No one understands.

I can't express myself too the world


No one understands.


The author's comments:
I felt alone!.

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on Mar. 4 2012 at 11:52 am
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

This was just one of thoes Late night writing poems! ^.^ But thanks.!

 


on Jul. 15 2011 at 9:13 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

I liked this but I think it says No one understands too many times. Maybe you could delete a couple of those. Other than that it had a really good message. I think everyone feels like that in their own way, you know?

Great Job!


on Jul. 15 2011 at 12:46 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
1 article 0 photos 202 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

Ah, I've felt like this many a time; I know how you feel. Good job decribing it, but I think you could use more adjctives to spice it up a bit.