Someone | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Someone

Someone

July 18, 2011
By NathanBHooker GOLD, Wentzville, Missouri
More by this author
NathanBHooker GOLD, Wentzville, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those that care don't matter; and, those that matter don't care."

View profile

I am finally alone
Left to my thoughts
Thinking of my torn home
All my opportunities and shots

I realize something
I’m not alone
I will always have this one thing
And it’s been you all along

I’m not sure about a lot of things
But I am about one
Me without you is a fly without wings
And as lonely as I feel, I will always have someone.

© Catlin W., Cogan Station, PA

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
La Push
By Renesmeem BRONZE
SeaTac, Washington
Renesmeem BRONZE, SeaTac, Washington
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Cracked vase
By Dale CROUCH PLATINUM
JOPLIN, Missouri
Dale CROUCH PLATINUM, JOPLIN, Missouri
29 articles 9 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
what is it?
By stardom21 BRONZE
Suisun City, California
stardom21 BRONZE, Suisun City, California
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
View profile
Poetry
Whisper
By Loki(norsegod) DIAMOND
Sapello, New Mexico
Loki(norsegod) DIAMOND, Sapello, New Mexico
62 articles 0 photos 2 comments
View profile
Poetry
Carry On
By BreLee SILVER
Sula, Montana
BreLee SILVER, Sula, Montana
7 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Diffrences
By Son`ador SILVER
Hamilton, Other
Son`ador SILVER, Hamilton, Other
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We all mess up sometimes,but if we make a conscious effort to do good more times than not, we&#039;ll be doing life right.&quot;<br /> Stephanie Perry Moore<br /> <br /> Life sucks, and then you die!!<br /> -Anonymous-

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 8 comments.

NathanBHooker GOLD said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 4:03 pm
NathanBHooker GOLD, Wentzville, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Those that care don&#039;t matter; and, those that matter don&#039;t care.&quot;

View profile
Thanks, thats the point ;)
xsassysydx GOLD said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 4:00 pm
xsassysydx GOLD, Boiceville, New York
18 articles 14 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path, and don&#039;t worry about the darkness, for that is when the stars shine brightest&rdquo;

View profile
i love this, it reminds me that i will always have somebody
NathanBHooker GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 9:48 pm
NathanBHooker GOLD, Wentzville, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Those that care don&#039;t matter; and, those that matter don&#039;t care.&quot;

View profile
Thanks :) I appreciate the feedback
Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 7:12 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

View profile
i really like this, it reminds me of the stuff i write! its really sweet and moving, good job! :)
NathanBHooker GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 8:14 pm
NathanBHooker GOLD, Wentzville, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Those that care don&#039;t matter; and, those that matter don&#039;t care.&quot;

View profile

Thanks, i appreciate that. I'm glad you realize the difficulty as well.

 

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 7:48 pm
You're so welcome! You're a great writer, and I'll always have time for people like  you! Rhyme is always something that I LOVE LOVE LOVE because I feel that it makes it flow better...now, not everyone will agree with me on this, but yeah. Rhymes are NOT easy, and you really pulled it off!
NathanBHooker GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 6:07 pm
NathanBHooker GOLD, Wentzville, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Those that care don&#039;t matter; and, those that matter don&#039;t care.&quot;

View profile
Thank you! I'm so happy that you got the message. I also appreciate that you noticed the rhyme, which I was a little apprehensive of using. Anyway, thanks for checking out my work, I really do appreciate it.
Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 4:46 pm

Fantastic, I really love the message that you are sending: that no matter how bad it gets, there will always be somebody there to help you out. Love it love it love it.

I have read some of your other work as well and love how flawlessly your rhymes come together. Rhyming used to bother me in the past when I wrote more poetry than stories, so I understand the difficulty of it.

Anway, love it love it love it!!