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Loneliness

July 24, 2011
By kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.


When I was alone
Everything went around
Then my happiness was gone
It was not just me, for loneliness I had found

Was made to think all over again and again
Of what I had lost and wrong done
Conceivably, I would feel in vain
And think to fulfill my destiny and wills

Was made to creep deep into my sorrows
And to think apparently of my fails
Logically, not wanting a life as it pointlessly goes
For how I missed good times I was on

Perhaps, I did thank loneliness
But not with him, went further
He heartlessly jumped into me without my expectation.
Chased loneliness and slightly thought of being filled with mirth and never just bother.


The author's comments:
Never think too much about anything, specially, about what you worry.

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on Jun. 23 2012 at 12:06 pm
AyeshaLiveLaughLove BRONZE, Overland Park, Kansas
4 articles 1 photo 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today."
-James Dean

First of all, great poem!  The message of this poem was present throughout and the way you gave it increasingly more power was through your outstanding sense of  language. I applaud you for this amazing piece!

Tonite BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 5:22 am
Tonite BRONZE, Toronto, Other
1 article 21 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am just two and two. I am hot. I am cold.
I'm the parents of number that cannot be told.
I'm a gift beyond measure, a matter od course,
And I'm yielded with pleasure - when taken by force."------Julian

i can totally relate

Fairy_Me said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 2:17 am
Fairy_Me, Kandy, Other
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream what you want to dream, go where you want to go,
be what you want to be. Because you have only one life and
one chance to do all the things you want to do.

I love this poem!!

on Jan. 7 2012 at 12:00 pm
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

i shud be thankful, anyway! ;)

on Jan. 7 2012 at 11:58 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

u r awesome dude! ;) thanx btw...

on Jan. 5 2012 at 4:58 am
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER, ROME GA, Georgia
8 articles 1 photo 35 comments
loneliness sucks make friends and u wont b lonely btw it was an amazing poem lol:)

butterfly123 said...
on Dec. 22 2011 at 10:18 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
0 articles 0 photos 408 comments
awesome poem! like it a lot!

zee11 said...
on Dec. 22 2011 at 9:47 am
zee11, Kandy, Other
0 articles 0 photos 17 comments
You've got a nice way of putting your feelings down in words...keep it up!!!!

on Dec. 21 2011 at 1:15 am
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER, ROME GA, Georgia
8 articles 1 photo 35 comments
very good keep up the good work

Lit.rox BRONZE said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 9:15 am
Lit.rox BRONZE, Kandy, Other
4 articles 0 photos 28 comments
creative!!!luv your work...