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Falling

July 25, 2011
By Vanda GOLD, Hemt, California
Vanda GOLD, Hemt, California
11 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Well when saying good-bye its usaully, "See you in the after life," but my favorite quote is, "Bazinga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"


Falling
Grab my hand before I fall
Save me from my death
I can’t stop myself
It’s an urge that haunts
It finds its way to my brain
Saying “Jump, let yourself go”
“No one cares if you do”
I try to hold back but the voice stands
It won’t give up
I can here you calling
Saying not to jump
To resist the urge
I can’t fight the urge
The impulse
“Take one more step” It pleads
“NO” I scream but it doesn’t work
I step forward
You calling
Trying to stop me
But you were too late
I fell down the cliff
Don’t say it was your fault
It was all me
I lost the fight
The fight against me
And my thoughts
The thoughts that begged,
Pleaded,
And urged
For me to plummet
So again don’t blame yourself
For not getting to me in time
I lost
And like the voice said
Whoever it may be
“No one will care when I’m gone”
No one cares about me


The author's comments:
I wrote this for one of my characters poems. But it was just for fun i guess. HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!!!!!

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Vanda GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 4:35 pm
Vanda GOLD, Hemt, California
11 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Well when saying good-bye its usaully, "See you in the after life," but my favorite quote is, "Bazinga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

thanks i'm using it in one of my stories.

HudaZav SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 1:17 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
8 articles 6 photos 390 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

I really love this, and you have a very different literary style of writing. I like it.    X)

Vanda GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 12:03 am
Vanda GOLD, Hemt, California
11 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Well when saying good-bye its usaully, "See you in the after life," but my favorite quote is, "Bazinga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Thanks and yes poor character

on Aug. 2 2011 at 8:01 pm
sweetdollsarah BRONZE, Hemet, California
3 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love me or Hate me it's still an obsession." --I don't know who wrote or said this quote got it off a friends school book and it stuck with me. "Pickles!" --I just say this all the time!! "It's not that I'm afraid to die, I just don't want to be there when it happens." -- Woody Allen

This is so good, I even know what character it's for!! Yay!! Poor character Spike. :( Great poem!! Love it!!