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I shall see MAG

July 29, 2011
By AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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I shall see your suffering soon,
only harsher than mine,
Given to you by the world
to me as a healing sign,

God will tell you how,
how expensive were my tears,
uncountable you gave,
like the days we spent which seemed
as never-ending years,

I shall see your heart break soon
into pieces such as mine,
over a person you'll think the world of,
yet the world sees as a gutter dime,

I shall see my friend,
the whole world shall see,
the result of my suffering,
through my eyes, your lies,
only this time the misery you'll attend.

© Tori W., Victoria, BC, Canada

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My mother, whom I thought the world of, left me and my siblings.
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Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 1:28 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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Emotional poem, I love it! Can you check out my work and rate and comment on it. It'll make my day. Thanks!
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 5:55 am
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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Thank you! It means a lot. I'm sure you know how t feels like :')
otherpoet SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 12:19 am
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I read this once, and thought of a broken-hearted girlfriend. Once i read your notes, I could see your anger at your mother. This is a poem that can be applied to so many situations. Great writing!
Fizza SILVER said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 6:45 am
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Nice poem. just like when u want to curse someone... nice work. :)
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 7:26 am
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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thank you!
cookiegirl said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 7:21 am
This is beautiful and unique:). I love the way its written.
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 3:29 pm
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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Thank you and sure!
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 3:28 pm
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Thank you!!!! :)
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This is beautiful, think you could check out some of my work sometime?
MarieLouiseA SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 6:44 am
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This is brilliant (: keep writing!
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 1:57 pm
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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How?
sallysunshine2 said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 6:43 am

Seriously?

Seriously.

<3 <3

SarahRoberts said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 6:37 am
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You made your pont
SarahRoberts said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 6:36 am
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Impressive. I liked your story, Once upon a Josh Miranda time. even better!
Emily56 said...
on Sep. 11 2011 at 4:00 am
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I think it's quite harsh in a way. 
muttomomi said...
on Sep. 11 2011 at 3:50 am
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Exactly. I love the raw emotion.
muttomomi said...
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A very deep and well written poem. I loved it. 
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Sep. 10 2011 at 2:52 am
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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Thank you and sure I'll love to go through your work. (:
WeAllBurn PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 12:42 pm
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this is stunning. i understand exactly what you went through.  5/5 <3

read some of my work please. your input means the world to me. (:

AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 12:09 pm
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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Thank you. 3 comments on my first ever poem. I feel accomplished to be honest.