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August 19, 2011
Sloth
Wrath
Lust
Envy
Gluttony
Greed
Pride
Seven Forces,
Fighting Destiny,
Til the edge of the World...
© Tatyana Z., Norwood, MA
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This article has 13 comments.
Kipitama said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 9:10 am
Nice job.
Sarajustine BRONZE said...
on Oct. 18 2011 at 4:07 pm
I liked this! It was very simple and meaningful. If I were you, I probably would have added a few more lines to it. But that's up to you. I love the quote on the side, by the way... Hahaa.
Readqueenz7 SILVER said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 5:42 pm
I agree with Harebelle, I think this would be nice if it was longer.
rage_against_the_machine BRONZE said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 3:24 pm
Ah, I see.
ZephyrVon-ZombieOverlord BRONZE said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 10:37 am
What's your name on there? Maybe you could join this rp... (of course, this would be after the seven characters became the new sins [long story])
ZephyrVon-ZombieOverlord BRONZE said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 8:46 am
I totally agree... I was simply bored, but i didn't want to write anything long, so i wrote about the Gaia roleplay i'm in.
I like the simplicity and shortness of this poem. It gives each individual word its own punch. That said, I think I do agree with rage_against_the_machine, listing the sins doesn't give me much. I like what you did with the ending though, it is powerful
rage_against_the_machine BRONZE said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 3:29 pm
Hmm.. I'm not one to judge how someone creatively expresses themselves, and I like the idea of this. But, I'm not really getting anything out of this, I think maybe you should have not named the sins, but rather implied them through description, to add a bit more depth to the poem.
Til The Edge of the World
that i am currently in. I play as the man who overthrows Sloth (it's so appropriate...)