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Good VS Bad

August 20, 2011
By WritngForTheWin GOLD, Portland, Oregon
WritngForTheWin GOLD, Portland, Oregon
15 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is the Banner i fly over my head,
Even when im shacled to the whim of decite." -Unknown.


I'm beginning to notice
I'm leaving my memories of my broken past
In the dark
Where they belong,

They're beginning to
Not crawl and bite
At my subconscious mind
At the back of my head,

I'm beginning to let new memories
Take the awful ones place;
Letting good conquer the bad.

My smile is larger
Every time a bad memory
Is gone and replaced with something I do
Want to remember,

I'm beginning to be me
Just without the horrid
Memories of depression, tears, and hurt.

I am me again.


The author's comments:
It is a diary entree in a poem. All my poetry is from the heart. When it aches, when it is longing, and when its head over heals; It all ends up in my poems. That's how you know it's legit.

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on Aug. 30 2011 at 2:45 pm
Shadowfoxz DIAMOND, Washington D.C, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
I have new work coming out every week. Yaay.

Haha hooray!! Now it'll email me when you contribute lol. Umm yeah, I'll drop you some ratings and comments ^__^ you may have to remind me though lol. If that's the case just email lol

on Aug. 30 2011 at 4:00 am
WritngForTheWin GOLD, Portland, Oregon
15 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is the Banner i fly over my head,
Even when im shacled to the whim of decite." -Unknown.

Well I'm sure you'll like my other ones. They have a lot more voice then this one does. Thank you for the comment :]

on Aug. 29 2011 at 12:29 pm
Shadowfoxz DIAMOND, Washington D.C, District Of Columbia
56 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have new work coming out every week. Yaay.

Very Nice. My poetry is the same way. Pure emotion. I could feel that. Very Very Legit ;)