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Never Ending Night

August 23, 2011
By BookOwl PLATINUM, Bristol, Tennessee
BookOwl PLATINUM, Bristol, Tennessee
32 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is hard to fail, but it is worse never to have tried to succeed." Theodore Roosevelt

In the never ending night, you have to fight.
My heart grows thin, to no end.
No time to run, scream to the wind.
Panic, it never ends.
Find the light, never ending night.

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This article has 4 comments.

Dewolf said...
on Sep. 22 2011 at 3:20 pm
For such little words, this poem really packed a punch! The fear and panic was so real, that my heart started to race a little. Keep up the good work and don't stop writing or photography!

on Sep. 12 2011 at 9:37 pm
You did a great job of capturing the feeling of fear in this poem; I can already feel my heart starting to race. Bravo!

on Sep. 6 2011 at 5:45 pm
Odessa_Sterling00 DIAMOND, No, Missouri
87 articles 108 photos 966 comments

Favorite Quote:
All gave some, some gave all. -War Veterans headstone.

Great job!  This actually reminded me of a limrick instead of a free verse. 

on Aug. 26 2011 at 7:35 pm
introducingshelby GOLD, San Diego, California
15 articles 1 photo 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People change so you can learn to let go, things go wrong so you can appreciate them when they go right, and things fall apart so better things can fall together."
-Marilyn Monroe

I like this. Brill :D