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The Death of Us

September 22, 2011
By Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
When life leaves us blind, Love keeps us kind.


Autumn breeze, and colored leaves
Foreshadowing the things to come;

So cold, and so crystal clear,
I can feel it oh so near;

Coming with such force,
Nothing will remain;

A devastating impact,
Leaving nothing the same;

Shake life at the core,
A foundation so unstable;

Dying to stay afloat,
But is quite unable;

Don’t fight the inevitable,
This evil caused by selfishness;

Broken beyond repair,
No joy in any of this;

I’ve seen the things I wish I didn’t
But know that I must;

It all happened so fast
You were the death of us;



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on Nov. 30 2011 at 11:29 am
Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
When life leaves us blind, Love keeps us kind.

Thank you so much!! :) I really appreciate your feedback, it means a lot!! This was actually the poem that made me decide to join this site! :p

on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:00 pm
xxtennis13xx SILVER, Clarkston, Michigan
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I'm pretty sure this was the first poem I favorited on here...I am in LOVE. You should try to get word out about this poem, so you can get likes and ratings and have it published (: 5 stars from me! I really love your work!