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I lay there

October 1, 2011
By MinTYicEcrEAm SILVER, Califon, New Jersey
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I lay there
Paralyzed
Crushed under the
Weight of my sorrow
Im soaked in my tears
Im chilled to the bone
My castle has come down

© Julia R., Bethesda, MD

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