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Struggled On

October 9, 2011
By ThinKnoWrite GOLD, New York City, New York
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You laugh because you think it's a joke. I laugh because you think I'm joking. -Kevin Hart

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The blue wind screamed through the mountains
As I struggled on
The icy slope seemed to get longer
As I struggled on
The mountain peak became in reach
As I struggled on
The chilly wind went up my bones
As I struggled
I proudly stand up on the top
I made it

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HereSheIs BRONZE said...
on Mar. 26 2017 at 3:40 pm
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Nice descriptions. I especially like "blue wind"