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What I have become.

October 11, 2011
By loveme.iputi BRONZE, Juneau, Alaska
loveme.iputi BRONZE, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Inspiration is first and always a temptation. An act is only a play of imagination, which is a brains creation."

I've disarmed my gun and shattered my sword.
Lost my anger and painted my war.
I've learned to love and how to forgive.
But lost myself in the torn pieces within.
The tears I cry, the blood I've lost, every single thing I've thought, just a token of my regret.
The regret I hold,
hold within my aching heart.
It stays inside, like a shadow,
a shadow beneath my soul.
It conquers my faith, my strength, and slowly my mind then my soul.
I am nothing but the darkness it's made and left behind.
but this choice to stay,
is a choice of mine.

The author's comments:
I wrote this for a friend who wasn't doing to good at the time..

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This article has 8 comments.

Vadda SILVER said...
on Oct. 13 2011 at 7:39 pm
Vadda SILVER, Fairbanks, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
A fault once denied, is twice committed.

I really like the mood and depth in this :)

on Oct. 13 2011 at 5:33 pm
FangPoet DIAMOND, Wichita, Kansas
74 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am yours as long as you are mine."

"Teenagers are in the forest of bad ideas an hormones."

"Your everything i want but nothing i need."
"I hate you so much ... i love you".

"Its the ugliest cute thing ever"!

"Everything is cute in its own way

In love the paradox occurs that two beings become one and yet remain two. - Erich Fromm

Wow the depth.

on Oct. 13 2011 at 4:23 pm
trapped_in_words BRONZE, Kansas City, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold your head up girl cuz there are people who would kill to see you fall

very nice i must say :)

on Oct. 13 2011 at 12:58 pm
daniblovee BRONZE, Newport News, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
The worst mistake anyone can make is being too afraid to make one.

i can relate.. this is very well written, good job :)

on Oct. 13 2011 at 11:15 am
sbarton123 SILVER, AuSable Forks, New York
5 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when people see your gravestone, they dont look at the dates the look at the dash inbetween." -unknown

This is wow. It's so deep. I love it

Aiden PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 12 2011 at 2:24 pm
Aiden PLATINUM, Vicksburg, Michigan
22 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
i am me, that's all I'll ever be.

this is amazing. i LOVE it!

on Oct. 12 2011 at 12:38 pm
MissUnderStood.2011 BRONZE, Sugarhill, Georgia
4 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Romans 12:2-4 Read It!!

This is beautiful keep writing and stay strong :) loook at my pieces

Writer62 said...
on Oct. 12 2011 at 11:13 am
That was amazing! Great writing.