Rejected | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Rejected

Rejected

October 10, 2011
By AliceAngel DIAMOND, Shreveport, Louisiana
More by this author
AliceAngel DIAMOND, Shreveport, Louisiana
60 articles 52 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
This brick wall I tried so hard to build, is tumbling down. - Me (AliceAngel)<br /> <br /> If drama were vodka, everyone at my school would be drunk. - Chloe, one of my friends.

View profile

Every word,
Is like a dagger in my side.
I feel rejected.
Hurt.
Sad.
You have rejected my work.
I don’t even remember what I wrote.
I know it was something about people in school,
But what it was really about,
I’m not sure.
And so here I am,
Writing this for all to see.
Talking about how you rejected me.

© Ruby B., Cincinnati, OH

The author's comments:
I wrote the first 2 lines, and then i went on teenink to see if my article had been posted. It hadn't and i realized it had probably been rejected. So i checked my email and there was the rejection notice. I felt kind of rejected, like i do sometimes at school. But it's okay, didn't hurt as much as it does at school.
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
To a Brother Growing Up
By imperfection GOLD
Gilroy, California
imperfection GOLD, Gilroy, California
17 articles 9 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Dream as though you&#039;ll live forever, live as though you&#039;ll die today.&quot;<br /> ~James Dean (1931-1955), American Motion Picture Actor, symbol of rebellion

View profile
Poetry
The Ending
By OurFrost GOLD
Galt, California
OurFrost GOLD, Galt, California
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments
View profile
Poetry
Nothing to say
By niceenouf PLATINUM
Garfield, New Jersey
niceenouf PLATINUM, Garfield, New Jersey
26 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;As we move on, you forget, we both move on, with no regret.&quot;

View profile
Poetry
Whisper
By Loki(norsegod) DIAMOND
Sapello, New Mexico
Loki(norsegod) DIAMOND, Sapello, New Mexico
62 articles 0 photos 2 comments
View profile
Poetry
Why?
By wordweaver96 PLATINUM
Winchester, Kentucky
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
37 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. &quot;<br /> Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> <br /> See, we really DON&#039;T have anything to fear but fear itself!

View profile
Poetry
Without You
By CarlyG GOLD
Emmaus, Pennsylvania
CarlyG GOLD, Emmaus, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never let the odds keep you from doing what you know in your heart you were meant to do.&quot; H. Jackson Brown Jr.

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 0 comments.