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Do they not see what they are doing

October 6, 2011
By poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
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"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

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I got my head phones in my ears
trying so hard to block out their voices
but the music is never loud enough
do they not see what they are doing to their little girl


I hide behind the couch
trying hard not to be foud
but were ever i go i am found
do they not see what they are doing to this family

I hold back the tears
but they come on anyway
crying into the dark for helpp and for peace
do they not see what they are doing

Soon it ends with one blow
with one word they are gone
do they not see what they did
this is were it lead

© Liana D., Somers, CT

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poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 4:05 pm
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
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&quot;A girl doesn&#039;t need anyone who doesn&#039;t need her&quot; Marylin Monroe

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Thank you so much (ik this is late but i jst nw got the time lol)
cookiegirl said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 9:23 am
Wow. You're poems are amazing, touching and beautiful:). Keep up the great writing.
Wonderment DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 9:23 am
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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wow, another good poem. You are really good at expressing yourself. I always feel like im seeing how you feel through your poetry.