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Excluded

October 19, 2011
By KatyPie97 GOLD, Eatonville, Washington
KatyPie97 GOLD, Eatonville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
We're going to need a bigger boat


I don't need you, running your flap
Everyday making me feel like crap
I thought we were friends, I guess I was wrong
With you I feel like I don't belong
I have better friends
It's too late for us to make amends
For the longest time I was excluded
Now you're on the outside, and I am included

The author's comments:
I wrote this while venting about how little I seem to mean to one of my friends.

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on Oct. 26 2011 at 11:17 am
LifeIsPoetry PLATINUM, Kapowsin, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Every time you smile at someone, it is an action of love, a gift to that person, a beautiful thing."
– Mother Teresa

This has a very "been there, done that" idea. We all know frenemies, but no one likes them. Great job capturing the emotions tied to the situation.