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September 29, 2011
By Madstyle BRONZE, Atlantic, Iowa
Madstyle BRONZE, Atlantic, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
never give up


I'm soaring so high above the ground
I feel so free all around
I could soar for miles on end
There's no way my spirit could bend.

O wait i'm falling
The operators calling
Help I scream
We're sending out a rescue team

It's to late they've fallen now
Why it crashed we don't know how
lay your head down pray for them
to their families and there friends
Their love for them will never end

Dedicated to families and friends who have lost a love one for a plane crash, terroist attack. etc.


The author's comments:
I dedicate this to 9/11

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on Oct. 26 2011 at 6:15 pm
Express-- PLATINUM, River Vale, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is what happens while you&#039;re busy making other plans&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -John Lennon

....fatal flaws. nice message though.

on Oct. 26 2011 at 6:06 pm
Smitty23 BRONZE, Urbandale, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you&#039;re not serious, why show up?&quot; -Bob Bowman

Great poem...very powerful

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 5:09 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don&#039;t you go to sleep, it&#039;s such a bitter form of refuge, oh don&#039;t you know the kingdom&#039;s under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I like this poem a lot, but I think that if you got out of the rhyming scheme you might be able to open more doors. Great work... think you could spare a little time and check out some of mine? Please?

on Oct. 25 2011 at 1:21 pm
Natasha1994 SILVER, Arizona City, Arizona
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i love this poem