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Moving on, Moving Forward

November 1, 2011
By HeartBreaker2010 SILVER, El Paso, Texas
HeartBreaker2010 SILVER, El Paso, Texas
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My soul ignites when I see your face,
Please don't change the time, don't change the place,
I wana be with you,
But I can never see It through,
I always fall short of your love,
I always think and say man, I should of,
But now your gone and that's the past,
Our love is gone, it did not last,
Our souls intwined,
Because that is how were designed,
But we broke apart,
We thought we had it at the start,
But I failed,
And off you sail,
To a brand new future,
That really does suit ya,
I just want the best for you,
Please dont say you have a clue,
Because I love you too,
Our lives can start anew,
With any distractions,
Or small little contraptions,
You can concentrate on school,
Instead the guys how are cool,
Who treat you like a tool,
Because you're as precious as a jewel,
You know you are actually pretty,
And have quite a bright mind,
You can have a great life with lots of great people cant you see this, are you blind?
You can do anything,
With your voice you can shout and sing,
Praise the lord with all. Your heart,
Sing to him from the start,
He will find you the right one,
He will give you your son,
He will guide your life straight,
And open up the holy gates,
You will be worthy, with God you can trust,
You can trust him, God is always just,
So please move on to find 'him',
The perfect guy who doesn't sin,
Good-luck and farewell,
I hope you find love I yell...

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BeccaAnne said...
on Nov. 4 2011 at 3:19 pm
BeccaAnne, Vanderbilt, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Love me now, love me never. If you love me now, love me forever."

I love this. I've been there and done that and it is a hard road, but you took that and turned it into something beautiful. Keep up the good work!

on Nov. 4 2011 at 2:36 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

This is a good poem. I like the message and the hopeful ending and how you worked God into it. The spelling and grammar need some touching up. Write "want to" instead of "wana". You once put "should of" instead of "should have" and "your gone" instead of "you're gone". But good job overall. I love this line: "Off you sail, to a brand new future".