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Where Are You?

October 28, 2011
By CompEet3 PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
CompEet3 PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
30 articles 0 photos 4 comments

You said I was to young,
to fend for myself,
you said I would always be your little girl,
but you were never there to notice

You said my life was going to be full,
but its half empty.
You said that you would never leave,but I was never there to notice.
Mum said you were a dream, but you are my father who created me.
You would rock me in your arm's.
But now they are empty.
You said I needed protected, but protected from what?

You are my dad but a stranger some days. Stranger's are friends to me.
I will know you someday,
but.
Where Are You?



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Zxarra GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 3:25 pm
Zxarra GOLD, Fitzwilliam, New Hampshire
14 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Earth without art is "eh"

I love it! This totally deserves 5 stars. It gets the message out very well I think.

on Nov. 26 2011 at 5:37 pm
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

I only have one thing to say, I LOVE THIS!!!

TapTap SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 11:18 am
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

It really shows your feelings! Great job, im not that great at it.... Keep Writing!

on Nov. 26 2011 at 11:17 am
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

This really strikes a chord with me. My parents were never there for me, and I fended for myself half the time. It's AMAZING.

on Nov. 26 2011 at 11:17 am
GabriellaRoars PLATINUM, Madison, Wisconsin
23 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"....I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad, The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had...."
-Tears of Fears-Mad World

amazing hon