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Some times it's better but some times it's not
Some times it’s better
to cower in the corner
to not be noticed
to not know what it’s like to be
loved
missed
heart broken
or depressed.
Some times it’s better
to have no friends
then to be used
to not have a boyfriend
then to be heart broken
to not try
so you can’t fail
Sometimes it’s better
to hide from reality
then face the facts
to live in a fantasy land
as opposed being hurt
To not talk
so you can’t be embarrassed.
Some times it’s better
but some time’s it’s not
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This is a very powerful poem, and it has a lot of feeling in it, I can tell.
There's really not much to say about it concerning corrections, since poetic license allows you to get away with a lot of it. One thing, though, you put "as opposed being hurt." There should be a "to" there, after "opposed."
Overall its a very touching poem. 5/5
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of<br /> <br /> "Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> "If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?