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November 11, 2011
By AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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you're so beautiful
I can't take my eyes off of you
your light green eyes
your crooked smile
rosy cheeks
freckles
the way your brown hair flows down over your eyes
the way your name sounds whenever I say it
you're so beautiful
yet you choose her
even though she could never love you as much as I do

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

The author's comments:
This poem is very personal to me. One of my very first I've written. About someone I've really have grown close to. Sadly, we're separated now but it's alright.
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AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2012 at 9:38 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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Thanks for the advice. I'm a girl but that's ok. :P
Blaque SILVER said...
on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:36 am
Blaque SILVER, Oklahoma, Oklahoma
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I love it.. Describe it more to your best of outcome or do you want to wait until it really matters?.. Tell them how beautiful she is compare her to the good things make her know that she is more special than anything ... I think that's what should show.. But i don't know ... I still love it  
LunaLives GOLD said...
on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:33 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

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It feels so real. And I can totaly relate.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 2:16 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Beautiful, I love your description!
M2coolTodd PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 1:52 pm
M2coolTodd PLATINUM, Clarksdale, Mississippi
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&quot; A day without laughter, is a day wasted.&quot;<br /> &quot; Embrace your awesomeness!&quot;

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IT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PRETTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AnimaCordis GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 2:35 pm
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
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&quot;Evil is when the good do nothing&quot;

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I really like this poem becuase it doens't describe the usual idea of beauty, the character described is different looking. The ending is also really sad, overall a nice poem!
KWeiberg321 SILVER said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 2:35 pm
KWeiberg321 SILVER, Cocoa, Florida
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&quot;I figure life is a gift and I don&#039;t intend on wasting it. You don&#039;t know what hand you&#039;re gonna get dealt next. You learn to take life as it comes at you...to make each day count.&quot;

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Good job (: I love descriptions like you used, it makes me feel more in depth with the story behind the poem.
KShep12 GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 3:45 pm
KShep12 GOLD, Lake Butler, Florida
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&quot;It isn&#039;t where you came from, its where you&#039;re going that counts.&quot; -Ella Fitzgerald

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This is good.
ToxicLove SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:15 am
ToxicLove SILVER, Hunh, Other
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&quot;The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep&quot;<br /> <br /> -Robert Frost

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Well it took me 3 years....i reallly truely was in luv.....well if it gets too hard then try listening to sum taylor swift songs when u r sad.....and some avril lavigne song when u r angry.......
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 3:49 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You&#039;ll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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thanks I wrote this when I was getting to know the person I am talking about he's amazing.
iamonecoolradiator said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 2:06 pm
iamonecoolradiator, London, Other
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the poem is just completely true and right and accurate..
Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 12:30 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
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it was so emotional! great job!

 

AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 11:58 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You&#039;ll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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thanks so much I'm still not over it. Sadly does it ever stop hurting?
ToxicLove SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:58 am
ToxicLove SILVER, Hunh, Other
9 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep&quot;<br /> <br /> -Robert Frost

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This iz a really lovely poem.....very sweet and heartbreaking.....well the same ting happeed to me sum years ago....
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 12:26 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You&#039;ll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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Thank you so much!
Manish9 SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 6:49 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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hey it's really nice and even though i am a boy , it reaaly relates to my life ... loved it <3<3<3<3<3<3 !!
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 4:47 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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I love the meaning behind this poem.  The rhythm is excellent this time and my only criticism is the punctuation and capitalization.  Keep writing! :)
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:43 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You&#039;ll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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It is about a guy. lol
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:39 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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i love when girls refer to guys as beautiful (im assuming its about a guy. i could be wrong. sry if i am) it adds to the intensness (lol new word)
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:33 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You&#039;ll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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thank you so much