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Nervous and In Love

November 11, 2011
By AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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sweat drips down my face
as I tell her about you
I'll know she'll understand
she's been in love before right?
so I tell her about you
she starts to cry but isn't
bittersweet she's not frustrated
she's not glum but what is she?
she's watching her little girl
become all grown up
I'm feel terrible when you come over but why?
I Love You
Don't I
but it's no big deal
soon I'll leave this house with you
spending ever second with you
I know I'll enjoy it
won't you?
Confused on what I should do
but why?
I'm Nervous but why?
I Love You Don't I?
she's hugging me with that death grip of hers as I think this threw
then I see our daughter me with her doing the same thing my mother is doing hugging me with joy
Our Daughter
that's when I know we'll love her as we Love each other

© Caitlin T., Marblehead, MA

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For my friend and her now ex but I guess that's bittersweet.
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This article has 17 comments.

AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Nov. 2 2012 at 10:33 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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Thank you so much. It means a lot XD
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 31 2012 at 10:41 am
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM, Lincoln, Nebraska
25 articles 0 photos 52 comments

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dont cry because it is over smile because it happened

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thats just amazing i am speatchless i love it
thatunknownthing DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 2 2012 at 1:04 pm
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
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"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"

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this is an entertaining piece, and you have conveyed a lot of emotions efficiently but not clearly and have you gone grammatically wrong i 'then i see our daughter.." that line isn't clear. but i think you would write spectacularly if you improvised on your errors a bit. good job.
GerryTheStone said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 1:22 pm
Love this! Amazing work you did!!
sunshine7223 SILVER said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 3:50 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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&quot;Afterall, a loose screw doesn&#039;t want to need, and a hammer doesn&#039;t want to be needed.&quot; -Me<br /> <br /> &quot;Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely.&quot; -Me

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I like this alot Jamie! Great job!!! :)
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 3:33 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You&#039;ll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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thanks I really appreciate that.
stephie95 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 2:01 pm
stephie95 PLATINUM, Tripoli, Other
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THIS IS REALLY GOOD , A LOT OF EMOTIONS :D
Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 12:32 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
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this was great!! i love your work!

 

AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 12:28 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You&#039;ll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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Thanks! I really connected with this.
Manish9 SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 6:54 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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really heart touching !!! nyc work , keep up the good work !!!!

 

CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 4:45 pm
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I think this is a great poem.  You just need to work on your punctuation and capitalization.  Maybe your rhythm could use a bit of tweaking (the fluctuating size of the lines is basically the problem).  But I love the idea behind this.  Well done! :)
KatrinaCampbell GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:37 pm
KatrinaCampbell GOLD, Aguadilla, Other
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That's really cute! You can definately see the gamut of emotions going on in the speaker's head!
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 3:33 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You&#039;ll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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thank you so much
collegegirladventures GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 5:25 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
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love Love LOVE IT!!!!
AnimaCordis GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:39 pm
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
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&quot;Evil is when the good do nothing&quot;

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I love how this poem seems to follow the speaker's thoughts, you can hear how comfused and afraid they are. Yet at the same time you can feel how exited and happy they are as well. Good poem!
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:07 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You&#039;ll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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thanks

 

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:53 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Jeremiah 29:11

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awwww, so cute!!!