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Little Crow

November 17, 2011
By Overkill SILVER, Gallup, New Mexico
Overkill SILVER, Gallup, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Killing Perfection
The secret to sucess is constancy of purpose


Oh little crow, little crow. Why are you so lonely? Little crow.
You must answer me! Trickster! Thief! Come hither!
And face the morrow's wrath! Let thy red blood flow!
Do not jest. Let me rest. Let my soul wither.
Little crow, where have you gone? Come. Fly, fly away.
To the distant skies you go! Bye, bye! We miss you so!
Sad am I! Little crow. See my face of woe?
Sing your melody, little crow. And remove your so hated scars.
They cannot harm. Let them go. Let them stay.
And so little crow, let thy red blood flow.
So now. Fly, fly away! Now go, my little crow.


The author's comments:
Well this is my first piece and I hope you like it. Criticism please, no tender lies. :D

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on Nov. 27 2011 at 1:42 pm
Overkill SILVER, Gallup, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Killing Perfection
The secret to sucess is constancy of purpose

Thank you for the comments! I was afraid that it was gonna a fluke. :p

on Nov. 22 2011 at 4:38 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
1 article 0 photos 629 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

It reminds me of a little kid angrily chasing birds away from the family garden! Great job, four stars!

on Nov. 22 2011 at 4:28 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
24 articles 4 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you" Tyler Durden Fight Club

I really like this. I like the repetition of "Little crow" It makes the poem flow very well. Great job