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November 16, 2011
By no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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your eyes are kind,
Looking at me from the space between
As we stand
Something makes me want to kiss you.
My brain and mouth aren't connected
I say something I never meant to say.
I look down at my feet again.
We meet eyes and smile, weakly.
It makes me think.
Maybe my life and yours were meant to intertwine.

© Annie P., Milford, CT

The author's comments:
Day 3 of the poetry challenge. Use the first ten full words on pg.8 of any book. 8 is my lucky number so I had a feeling this would turn out well. I hope you like it.
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megpie000 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:51 pm
megpie000 PLATINUM, Marietta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Give generously to him and do so without a grudging heart; then because of this the Lord you God will bless you in all your work and in everything you put your hand to." Deuteronomy 15:10

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I loved this!! Super cute and beutifully written! :) 

 

sunshine7223 SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:21 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

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This is short, lol. Usually I do not like short poetry, but you succeeded in making me a fan of it. You did a very good job. I like your choice of words. (: