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Someone There
November 26, 2011
Someone is always there to hold you
To pick you up when you are down
To put a smile on your face
To turn that frown upside down
If you keep looking
No one will compare
To the person you loved dearly
Even though they’re still not there
If you let yourself let go
If you keep yourself controlled
You will find the one you need
Both of you will make good deeds
© Nathalie L., St. Albans, NY
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This article has 6 comments.
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 6:50 pm
I just realized that but thank you for you critiquing my work!
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 6:41 pm
Beautiful poem! I really like how it flows and my only criticism is that the two 'down's in one stanza are kind of repetitive. But that's only minor. Keep writing! :)
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:51 pm
Thanks musicluver :)
musicluver SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:34 pm
Not so bad girl.
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