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Maybe, maybe not.

November 27, 2011
By Amanda24 DIAMOND, Lynnfield, Massachusetts
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Amanda24 DIAMOND, Lynnfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
" Move on. It's just a chapter in the past. But dont close the book, just turn the page.

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Do I like you?
I thought we were just friends,
Maybe more.
I like you,
I don’t like you.
So you do like me?
Maybe.
If we are just friends than why do I love you?
Friends don’t feel this way about other friends.
One more try, that’s all.
Why do we keep this up?
People change and time keeps ticking.
I love you,
I always will, no matter what happens.
Wherever I am in my life I will still love you.
I will love you until I take my last breath of air.
And with my very last breath of air,
I will breathe the words I love you.

© Nicole D., Palm Harbor, FL

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MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:04 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One heartbeat."

"Our scars remind us of where we've been; they don't dictate where we're going."
-SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

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Have only ever really felt this way about a few select people in or previously in my life. Like the other commentors, I liked the use of questions. The whole beginning just kind of created this sense of uncertainty, and I like how it smoothed out a little bit towards the end. Nice job. :)
jcrisp BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 3:43 pm
jcrisp BRONZE, Sutton Valence, Other
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my favourite thing is also the use of questions, keeps it very fast and confusing :D
Karlynne PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 3:39 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

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wow...that was really good. extremely deep. i loved it! 5 stars!
AnimaCordis GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 3:39 pm
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
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"Evil is when the good do nothing"

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 i like your creation of voice in this, and your use of questions

nice job!

samwich7 said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 3:39 pm
samwich7, No, New York
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Awesome. I can so relate :)