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The Golden Mere

November 26, 2011
By Ella1 GOLD,
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments

He was staring when we first met
staring back at himself in a mere
it was time I be more daring
I step out from behind a tree
he turns his head toward me
I duck behind the tree
I gingerly make my way back out
he is gone
I walk up to where he last sat
and look down into the clear water
the most perfect face stares back at me
I take a step closer
it’s not my face
I feel something like butter milk beneath my feet
I take a step back
a small narcissus flower lay on the ground

flat and

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Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 11:38 am
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
thank you!

on Jan. 28 2012 at 8:01 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Beautiful style of writing. Keep it up!

on Jan. 13 2012 at 8:24 pm
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
28 articles 13 photos 66 comments
that. was not the ending I expected, ha :P but i like it! except the smushed flower part :-/