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I Feel Like a Fool

November 27, 2011
By Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
75 articles 0 photos 141 comments

Do you even miss me?
Do you even care that I am gone?
I suppose not,
I mean,
I always knew that I didn't matter,
that much to you.
Unless you wanted something that is.
I feel like a fool,
for falling into your trap so many times.
I feel like a fool,
for trusting you when I knew I shouldn't have.
But most of all,
I feel like a fool,
for letting you in when I shouldn't have,
because all you did was destroy me,
and make me more wary,
than I already was.

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This article has 4 comments.

Grkster SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 8:14 pm
Grkster SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge -einstein

truly amazing. my emotions toward someone right now. 

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 3:12 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

AMAZING! this could be a kick booty song! XD

on Dec. 11 2011 at 1:41 pm
KWeiberg321 SILVER, Cocoa, Florida
8 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I figure life is a gift and I don't intend on wasting it. You don't know what hand you're gonna get dealt next. You learn to take life as it comes at you...to make each day count."

Wow. Honestly, speechless. You described what has inspired me to write all my poems in this specific one. I have been trapped in a relationship like this for a VERY long time & this just wow. It reached out to me more than I could describe. My favorite definitely. (:

on Dec. 11 2011 at 12:37 am
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 124 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

LOVED IT!:) I only have ONE suggestion. I think at the end you should say, "I am a fool." I just think it would give it more OOMPH. Lol. But other than that, it is really good. :) Great job! :))