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Heartbreak Thy Name is Guinevere

December 8, 2011
By beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt


Our ending was trite...
Her own cheating revealed
with my ex best friend.

She left me broken,
my heart mangled and ripped,
Why I ask you? Why??


The author's comments:
Well I was re-reading Avalon High by Meg Cabot, and I was thinking that what if in the legend, Arthur felt true love toward Guinevere?

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on Feb. 4 2012 at 5:02 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thank you~

.Skyye. GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 2:38 pm
.Skyye. GOLD, Oroville, California
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Favorite Quote:
All I have seen teaches me to trust the Creator for all I have not seen.

I walk by Faith, not by sight

I liked the poem and I liked your title :-) Well done :-)

on Jan. 6 2012 at 6:39 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Duly noted~ thank you for your comments:)

on Jan. 6 2012 at 6:35 pm
ChangeIsCertain, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"If you are going through hell, keep going." - Winston Churchill

"If you eliminate the impossible, then whatever remains, no matter how improbable, must be the truth." -Sherlock Holmes (Arthur Conan Doyle)

I don't think it's too focused on the heartbreak, but it could spend more time describing what happened or how he feels.

on Jan. 6 2012 at 5:22 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thank you! But do you feel that it is too focused on heartbreak?

on Jan. 3 2012 at 4:44 pm
ChangeIsCertain, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"If you are going through hell, keep going." - Winston Churchill

"If you eliminate the impossible, then whatever remains, no matter how improbable, must be the truth." -Sherlock Holmes (Arthur Conan Doyle)

Wow... I don't know why the rest of my comment cut off. I was saying that I liked your poem as it was very straight to the point.

on Jan. 3 2012 at 4:44 pm
ChangeIsCertain, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"If you are going through hell, keep going." - Winston Churchill

"If you eliminate the impossible, then whatever remains, no matter how improbable, must be the truth." -Sherlock Holmes (Arthur Conan Doyle)

Arthurian legend.