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Heartbreak Thy Name is Guinevere

December 8, 2011
By beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

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Our ending was trite...
Her own cheating revealed
with my ex best friend.

She left me broken,
my heart mangled and ripped,
Why I ask you? Why??

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

The author's comments:
Well I was re-reading Avalon High by Meg Cabot, and I was thinking that what if in the legend, Arthur felt true love toward Guinevere?
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beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 5:02 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

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Thank you~
.Skyye. GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 2:38 pm
.Skyye. GOLD, Oroville, California
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All I have seen teaches me to trust the Creator for all I have not seen.<br /> <br /> I walk by Faith, not by sight

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I liked the poem and I liked your title :-) Well done :-)
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 6:39 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Duly noted~ thank you for your comments:)
ChangeIsCertain said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 6:35 pm
ChangeIsCertain, Alpharetta, Georgia
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&quot;If you are going through hell, keep going.&quot; - Winston Churchill<br /> <br /> &quot;If you eliminate the impossible, then whatever remains, no matter how improbable, must be the truth.&quot; -Sherlock Holmes (Arthur Conan Doyle)

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I don't think it's too focused on the heartbreak, but it could spend more time describing what happened or how he feels.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 5:22 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Thank you! But do you feel that it is too focused on heartbreak?
ChangeIsCertain said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 4:44 pm
ChangeIsCertain, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you are going through hell, keep going.&quot; - Winston Churchill<br /> <br /> &quot;If you eliminate the impossible, then whatever remains, no matter how improbable, must be the truth.&quot; -Sherlock Holmes (Arthur Conan Doyle)

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Wow... I don't know why the rest of my comment cut off. I was saying that I liked your poem as it was very straight to the point.
ChangeIsCertain said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 4:44 pm
ChangeIsCertain, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you are going through hell, keep going.&quot; - Winston Churchill<br /> <br /> &quot;If you eliminate the impossible, then whatever remains, no matter how improbable, must be the truth.&quot; -Sherlock Holmes (Arthur Conan Doyle)

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Arthurian legend.