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December 15, 2011
By Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

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My problems sound small,
But feel so very big.
Overbearing,
Overpowering,
To the point of breakdown.
Can You release me from this burden?
Of course You can.
But will You?
One day...

© Bekah R., Snellville, GA

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butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 8:37 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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i know exactly what you mean! good job!
yazigirl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 4:54 pm
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

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"people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here"- one tree hill

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its short, it expresses so much emotion. i belive you did an amazing job really
AlaskaGirl GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 10:57 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

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"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

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I really like it
RMicchelle said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 10:56 pm
RMicchelle, Corry, Pennsylvania
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You don't have to like me... I like myself, and that's enough

"When life gives you lemons it better give you sugar too or your lemonade is going to suck."

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I LOVE THIS!!! I can so relate