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Hold On Forever

December 23, 2011
By Tbug1997 PLATINUM, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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Tbug1997 PLATINUM, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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When in doubt... Blame it on your siblings <br /> when life gives you skittles throw them at random people and yell FEEL THE RAINBOW

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When you told me

i prayed for you

When i heard you say the words you said and the sadness in your eyes

I knew as your friend i had to help and hold on to you

Don't give up because of your mistake

Don't be sad because of what people might says

because i will hold on to you forever

Don't give in to the responsibility of what your gonna
have

because i am here

Don't slip away

Because i will hold you here and i won't let you slip

I am here and will hold on to you Forever

© Lindsey D., Marblehead, MA

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My friend is having a tough time and i wrote this in her honor
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Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 3:43 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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a couple of little errors...nothing a short proofreading wouldn't fix
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 3:41 pm
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Incredibly sweet, and it flows beautifully! Your friend is very lucky to have your friendship :)
Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 8:08 am
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I liked it :)
Plain-Jane ELITE said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 8:22 pm
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lovely poem and from the heart! just a few spelling errors "says" should be "say" and "your" "you're". i can tell you really love your friend and that makes an amazing poem