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Burnt out Remnants

December 15, 2011
By Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
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Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

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The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir

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Did you really love me?
Before you had to go....
Did you really care?
Like you said you did.....
Were you truly going to wait?
I want(ed) you to....
But you're gone.
...
Silence
And burnt out remnants of shooting stars.

© Laura Lee G., Thornwood, NY

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Let the silence speak for itself....
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This article has 5 comments.

Ashleyy1213 GOLD said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 4:15 pm
Ashleyy1213 GOLD, CHICAGO, Illinois
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its good.. make it longer though
Paris1997 GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:16 pm
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
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Thanks a lot. :)
Paris1997 GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:15 pm
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
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Thank you. :)
Luckylucky GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:14 pm
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niceeee....... short but meaningful....
LoveIsMyReligion BRONZE said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:14 pm
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this is really good i like it