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Burnt out Remnants

December 15, 2011
By Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir


Did you really love me?
Before you had to go....
Did you really care?
Like you said you did.....
Were you truly going to wait?
I want(ed) you to....
But you're gone.
...
Silence
And burnt out remnants of shooting stars.


The author's comments:
Let the silence speak for itself....

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on Feb. 6 2012 at 4:15 pm
Ashleyy1213 GOLD, CHICAGO, Illinois
17 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is the art of drawling, without an eraser.

its good.. make it longer though

Paris1997 GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:16 pm
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir

Thanks a lot. :)

Paris1997 GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:15 pm
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir

Thank you. :)

on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:14 pm
Luckylucky GOLD, Hartford, Connecticut
13 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
''be nice to others,everyone is fighting their own battles''
''only people who risk going far,know how far they can go''
''what have you done to make your life better?''

niceeee....... short but meaningful....

on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:14 pm
LoveIsMyReligion BRONZE, Saskatoon, Other
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Every story starts with an idea, but it is the characters that move this idea forward.”

this is really good i like it