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Burnt out Remnants

December 15, 2011
By Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir


Did you really love me?
Before you had to go....
Did you really care?
Like you said you did.....
Were you truly going to wait?
I want(ed) you to....
But you're gone.
...
Silence
And burnt out remnants of shooting stars.


The author's comments:
Let the silence speak for itself....

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on Feb. 6 2012 at 4:15 pm
Ashleyy1213 GOLD, CHICAGO, Illinois
17 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is the art of drawling, without an eraser.

its good.. make it longer though

Paris1997 GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:16 pm
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir

Thanks a lot. :)

Paris1997 GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:15 pm
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir

Thank you. :)

on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:14 pm
Luckylucky GOLD, Hartford, Connecticut
13 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039;be nice to others,everyone is fighting their own battles&#039;&#039;<br /> &#039;&#039;only people who risk going far,know how far they can go&#039;&#039;<br /> &#039;&#039;what have you done to make your life better?&#039;&#039;

niceeee....... short but meaningful....

on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:14 pm
LoveIsMyReligion BRONZE, Saskatoon, Other
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Every story starts with an idea, but it is the characters that move this idea forward.&rdquo;

this is really good i like it