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My Kryptonite

December 13, 2011
By A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
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A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.
If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn't come back it was never yours.
I'm scared to fall and be dropped.

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I always
have words
for everything
but
you make me
speachless
i'm always
confident
but you make me
nervous
i'm always
calm and collected
but you make me freak out
tongue tied
i've got goose bumpes
but i'm alright
even though
you're
my kryptonite

© Chirstine H., Brooklyn, NY

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SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 1:56 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe

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No it's okay I have to admit I do the samething sometimes but only in my notebook or when I'm really in a rush.
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 1:52 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.
If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn't come back it was never yours.
I'm scared to fall and be dropped.

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I'm sorry for my gramatical errors, and did the every line uncapitalized because I didn't think that it was suppose to be capitalized..
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 1:46 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe

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This was fantastic but you need to change the "i"s into "I"s. And when you start with a new line in a poem you have to make the lower cases into bigger cases. (Not sure if that's what they call the baby letters and big letters lol) It was really a fantastic poem all in all :).