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one more day without you.

December 31, 2011
By LyssaPoo SILVER, Manteno, Illinois
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LyssaPoo SILVER, Manteno, Illinois
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"love doesnt die because of distance, love dies because of doubts."

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it seems the days are getting a little colder.
and the memories of you and i are getting older.
but day by day, i think a little more.
and realize that the half of my heart i still do have, is still sore.
i didn't deserve what you put me through.
my feeling were completely true.
i gave you everything and got nothing in return.
the pictures i try to burn.
but something holds me back, memories? nightmares? love. i don't really know.
but the feelings are getting easier to not show.
i can actually smile a little more knowing you're getting what you gave me.
and a nothing you'll always be.
i don't care if you talk about me, i don't care if you lie.
but i will no longer believe your heart warming sigh.
now, i hide my heart somewhere where no one would ever find it.
and there it will forever sit.
thinking about a day where my other half comes along.
and sings my happily ever after song

© Belinda H., Palm Harbor, FL

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LyssaPoo SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 11:26 am
LyssaPoo SILVER, Manteno, Illinois
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&quot;love doesnt die because of distance, love dies because of doubts.&quot;

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thanks!!!! i have more coming in submission right now :D
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 3:23 pm
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
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&ldquo;Accept no one&#039;s definition of your life; define yourself&quot;<br /> &quot; Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!&quot;<br /> &quot;A wise girl kisses, but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, leaves b4 shes left.&quot;

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I agree with all of them, this is really good. keep me posted if you don't mind thx.
Fabala_G BRONZE said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 12:35 pm
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I liked this idea a lot! Well done! I hate to do this on a comment but my first poem just got accepted on here, and I'd really appreciate if you guys rated/commented. I want some feedback! Thanks!
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i really like this good job!
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on Jan. 6 2012 at 8:53 pm
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I can totally relate!
live.love.learn. SILVER said...
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i really really like this.. it has that independent stand to it.. yet ur tellin ur old love u dnt need them its wonderful keep going! :)
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OMG THIS IS REALLY GOOD PLEASE RIGHT MORE POEMS