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The Best of a Soul

January 1, 2012
By kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.


When you are with the world, like it with passion,
For, your sight is wide open!
There’s nothing to feel odd about opening your heart,
For, a pure heart enjoys it that way!
Try to enjoy which is good, but you dislike,
For, then you will feel a change!
Don’t be back with what you ought to know,
For, something will be disturbing if you are!
Make fear reduce from you,
For it is what stops you from trying!
Trying hard will bring success,
For, experiences are what it has got!
Always be a faithful and a good man,
For, that is the best a soul can be!
Best of a soul is how positive he is, with himself,
And how grateful he is to the world!


The author's comments:
When one is grateful, he is blessed,
When one is positive, he is thoughtful and patient!

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RCB31 said...
on May. 6 2012 at 2:24 am
RCB31, Kanyakumari, Other
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Whatever happens life has to go on"

Very Nice...Keep it uP...

on Jan. 31 2012 at 10:01 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Thanks, dude! :)

Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 8:56 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 93 comments
love it!!!!!

on Jan. 24 2012 at 10:31 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Gracious. Yah I will, so will u? And feel free to leave a comment!

on Jan. 23 2012 at 8:50 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

This is beautiful. Awww. You write like an adult from medeival times. It's very distinctive in a great way. I'd be honored if you checked out my other stuff. :D

cookiestar said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 3:41 am
Wow. I love this poem:). It's beautiful written. Good job!

Tonite BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 5:13 am
Tonite BRONZE, Toronto, Other
1 article 21 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am just two and two. I am hot. I am cold.
I'm the parents of number that cannot be told.
I'm a gift beyond measure, a matter od course,
And I'm yielded with pleasure - when taken by force."------Julian

this is beautiful!!!!!!!

on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:35 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

very well, thank u!

Fairy_Me said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 1:54 am
Fairy_Me, Kandy, Other
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream what you want to dream, go where you want to go,
be what you want to be. Because you have only one life and
one chance to do all the things you want to do.

Wow!! I love this poem!! It makes me read again and again...

on Jan. 6 2012 at 12:31 pm
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

I'll give a bow to your comment.. :) Thank you!

on Jan. 6 2012 at 12:29 pm
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

thanx man.. i really felt right it this way!

on Jan. 5 2012 at 4:50 am
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER, ROME GA, Georgia
8 articles 1 photo 35 comments
this poem was beautiful keep it up man

IzzyVT SILVER said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 2:57 pm
IzzyVT SILVER, N. Ferrisburg, Vermont
6 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If the person you are talking to doesn't appear to be listening, be patient. It may simply be that he has a small piece of fluff in his ear.”
― A.A. Milne, Winnie-the-Pooh

I love your use of exclamation points...what a joyful poem! And the art you've chosen is a nice fit.