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Life's Melody

January 4, 2012
By browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~


Short and Simple
Soft and Sweet
Listen to life's melody

The harmony
Our part to play
A new note added everyday

The more and more
We get along
The more you can hear life's sweet song


The author's comments:
I was just thinking about how music moves the whole world along.

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on Jan. 11 2012 at 4:00 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

Thanks so much!!!

on Jan. 10 2012 at 10:50 pm
Spiritless BRONZE, Corry, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
" I'm selfish, impatient, a little insecure but if you can't handle me at my worst then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best" ---Marilyn Monroe

Love it! Simple. Short. And Sweet.

on Jan. 10 2012 at 7:04 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

really? I've always wanted to learn. I hoped I was getting my point across well enough...thanks fab!!!

on Jan. 9 2012 at 10:01 pm
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

I play piano :) this was awesome. Such a big message in such a simple poem! It's great!

on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:46 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

Music is mine too. I danced from the time I was 2 until I was 9. I wish I still could....I also started playing the flute in 5th grade. Music is my everything. Color gaurd?? I've heard of it but what is it exactly?

on Jan. 8 2012 at 5:04 pm
kaleighmay GOLD, Troy, Michigan
13 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'll be okay, I hope.

Yea, music is really my life. Music has always been in my life since I started dancing when I was 4 years old. And then I chose to play the violin in 5th grade and I've played since then. And being in my schools color guard and winter guard adds more love to my love of the arts and music.

on Jan. 8 2012 at 4:59 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

Really? i play the flute!

on Jan. 8 2012 at 4:52 pm
kaleighmay GOLD, Troy, Michigan
13 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'll be okay, I hope.

omg, i play the violin and i totally understand this poem!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

on Jan. 8 2012 at 4:23 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

Thanks!! I appreciate it.

on Jan. 8 2012 at 4:08 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways."

LOVE this!

on Jan. 8 2012 at 8:01 am
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

Thanks GreenEyes!!! (lol) I will keep putting them up. I hope you keep reading them and giving me your opinion.

GreenEyes said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 8:54 pm
Amazing..Dearie, I love you. [: Put more of your poems up, they're ALL amazing.