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The World Ends

January 9, 2012
By Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
32 articles 31 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep." -Robert Frost

Here is where
The world ends
The river twists and bends
Till it cascades
Down a narrow ledge
Over the edge
Beyond oblivion
Raining into

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This article has 4 comments.

on Apr. 9 2012 at 4:46 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
17 articles 7 photos 131 comments
I agree with everyone who has commented on here. Again, I LOVE this poem, and I must say that I also love your style!!!

on Feb. 2 2012 at 11:11 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1398 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Yeah, I agree with readaholic. This poem puts images into one's brain when reading it. I liked it--simple and direct.

on Feb. 1 2012 at 6:55 am
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
27 articles 0 photos 425 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

Cool :) Love the idea and the picture it puts in your head

on Jan. 22 2012 at 4:58 pm
Kimberlywrites BRONZE, Waikoloa, Hawaii
2 articles 3 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
For we have not been given a spirit of fear but of power and of love and of a sound mind.

II Timothy 1:7

I love the simplicity and descriptiveness of this poem. It's beautiful.