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I'm so hurt

December 23, 2011
By bweezy SILVER, Middlefield, Ohio
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girls are like parking spaces all the good ones are either taken or handicapped- greg sadler

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Like this we used to be
In this big world just you and me
Now when I awake you point and laugh
You used to be my other half

It took but a year
And everything ended as I feared
I used to speak on your behalf
You used to be my other half


You make me leave tears in my wake
You were so real but now are fake
Your hatred a dance choreographed
You used to be my other half

Like this we used to be
In this big world just you and me
Now when I awake you point and laugh
What happened to my other half?

© Zhihan C., Hudson, OH

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